Honestly, this was my second time giving this title a chance. I want to like it and didn't want to make a comment that's solely about things I think could be better because it looks like it has a lot going for it but I ran into so many things to leave feedback about I kept getting pulled out to add to this comment.
Something that made things a little difficult to get into the last time I played was the translations and proof reading. They were a bit rough the last time I played (last October or so) and while they've improved in some areas they're still the same in others.
For example, when the player first goes to interact with Hayami they're met with "Tell me, [mc name]".
Personally, I think that although the font used looks nice what's holding it back is that there's no lowercase letters with it. So it's as though everyone is yelling at each other all of the time. For anyone reading this, press A (Sorry, I don't know the mobile equivalent for this menu!) to select a font override if you don't want characters yelling at each other.
I think MC has a clone or something because, from what I've seen there's two of them. The first one we are introduced to has white hair and it doesn't cover their face all that much. Then when reading together with Kioko in the library we suddenly have black hair and bangs that cover the top half of our face. Just... What?
Some sort of event tracker would be nice. I had no idea what to do or where to go after the prologue ended. I kinda just wandered around aimlessly afterward trying to find or start events/interactions to work toward.
I think the biggest thing is that the listing for this game is constantly deleted and created again with each new version. I totally understand why since other games do it as well, but the difference is that they keep a "Main page" (See Total Maidness! by OnionCuttingNinja as an example) so that you can still see feedback left by other users and news posts about previous versions. That's not to mention ratings left for this also disappear and kind of makes rating this feel pointless since it'll be gone in a few weeks time anyways.
Admittedly I didn't make it far but just some bugs/issues I noticed when playing:
With our first introduction to Hayami when MC bumps into her the textbox says their name before the MC and the player even knows what it is and are properly introduced to her
When MC is speaking to Akane in the teacher's lounge after Akane says "Don't worry" for a couple of frames it's of the two of them in her house before they even leave to go there
When MC is introduced to Joseline he say's "I'm [name], nice to meet you; it's a pleasure to meet you".
Some of the signs around the school aren't proof read, or at least the English ones aren't. For example "Nursing" should be "Nurse's Office" or "Infirmary" like it says in the text box when I clicked it. "Gimnasia" should be "Gymnasium", "Kitchen" should be "Cafeteria", one just straight up says "Teachers" instead of "Teachers Lounge" or "Faculty Room". Weirdly enough, they're correct on the little Fast Travel button.
Speaking of weirdness, what's even more weird is that the nurses office isn't on the fast travel menu.
After attending class I got a message saying "-10 De Energy -10 De Hunger" I guess that it's supposed to say "-10 to Energy -10 to Hunger"?
When playing in English and then after entering the gym after class ends one of options is still in Spanish. "Elige la dificultad"
When playing the exercising minigame there's a little error message in the upper left "image 'marcador' not found"
Hilariously enough, when playing the exercising minigame (and I assume all minigames) if you press one of the fast travel keys you're performing the minigame in that location. For example, I accidentally pressed the 2 key and was still doing the minigame but now in the Library.
When eating with Hideki the message I got afterward was still mostly Spanish "+15 De Confidence +10 de Happiness con HIDEKI"
When viewing the shop on MC's computer it says "Tu dinero" instead of "Your money" or just "money" and "Objetos" instead of "Objects"
I didn't mean or want to make such a long comment but especially since it makes it look like I'm just pointing out the negatives but, like I said above, I just kept running into thing after thing. Sorry for such a long read!
Thank you very much for the effort and dedication in finding bugs and things to improve, I am aware that the game has many bugs, so in each update I'm fixing them, but thanks to these comments I can know what I have to correct and improve seriously thank you very much <3
1: I've been thinking the same thing, already for the next update it will be changed to a nicer font and with sense.
2: The clone that you comment are the same MC, only the one with black hair is the old MC and the one with white hair is the new remodel that I've been changing all the scenes where the old one appears
3: Did you try to open the mobile to look at the missions you have available with the girls?
4: I had not looked at it from that point of view, very interesting, thank you very much for the idea.
5: Again thank you very much for commenting on the bugs in the next update will be fixed <3
Don't worry about making comments so long and complete, I like that kind of comments, they bring a lot to improve
i kinda dislike how for the first... idk... 20+ days, there's nothing to do outside of going to class and then go sleep lol most games have more map parts unlocked since the 1st days
Of course, the idea is that most of the things are avoidable to keep people's tastes separate, but later on, for main story issues, they will have to be connected, I'm still thinking about this possibility (✿◡‿◡)
Oye,no es por ofender pero la próxima actualización deberia de ser solo de corrección de errores porque enserio que ya detecte como 5 bugs,es un MUY BUEN juego pero los bugs hacen que no se disfrute como debería
If you come from the previous release, don't worry, nothing has changed, it's still the same version. The cheat menu you should find it in your room in a small chest. If you don't have it locked, you can write me from Gmail or Discord server and I will solve the problem. (✿◡‿◡)
Well it is very rare that the Patreon version asks you for a password, surely it is due to an error, in a moment I will check the version to see what is happening if I find any error I will release a version that fixes this soon, but first check what version of the game you are installing, maybe it is due to an installation error. ( ・∀・)ノ
Lo prometido es deuda,dije que si encontraba un error en la nueva versión vendria a reportarlo:Si hablas con Hikari en la biblioteca aparece el modelo antiguo de nuestro personaje
El modelo antiguo aparece en muchas cinematicas,tambien creo que encontré otro bug donde algunas cosas que no gastan energía requieren de energía como hacer de comer e ir a clase
Lo dejé así en esta actualización porque pienso poner varias interacciones para que hablar con Kioko no sea monótono y aburrido. A igual que con las demás personajes, pienso mejorar las interacciones que se tienen con ellas.
Bueno pero también debo de decir que se debe de mejorar mucho las cosas con el nuevo modelo del personaje ya que el juego toma cuenta como que ya conoci a Jocelyn por el evento de ir a la casa de la maestra pero nunca la llegue a ver en esas escenas
Creo que se debe el guardado que tienes, debe estar con algunos errores por las nuevas variables e implementaciones. Deberías conocer a Joseline en el nuevo prólogo. (❁´◡`❁)
Nop,desde la última vez que lo había jugado pasaron varias actualizaciones y también reinicie mi teléfono de fabrica asi que ese error es de parte del juego
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How do I earn money in the game?!
After the appointment with Kioko you will have to wait until Saturday. (●'◡'●)
What I wanna know is 🥲 how do I earn money in the game and I'm confused if I'm still playing prologue 🫠
After the appointment at the cafeteria with kioko you should wait until Saturday (✿◡‿◡)
one more thing the work in the cafe is hella bugged customers sit and they dont even order i litreally have to assume if its cofee or tea fix that pls
Honestly, this was my second time giving this title a chance. I want to like it and didn't want to make a comment that's solely about things I think could be better because it looks like it has a lot going for it but I ran into so many things to leave feedback about I kept getting pulled out to add to this comment.
Something that made things a little difficult to get into the last time I played was the translations and proof reading. They were a bit rough the last time I played (last October or so) and while they've improved in some areas they're still the same in others.
For example, when the player first goes to interact with Hayami they're met with "Tell me, [mc name]".
Personally, I think that although the font used looks nice what's holding it back is that there's no lowercase letters with it. So it's as though everyone is yelling at each other all of the time. For anyone reading this, press A (Sorry, I don't know the mobile equivalent for this menu!) to select a font override if you don't want characters yelling at each other.
I think MC has a clone or something because, from what I've seen there's two of them. The first one we are introduced to has white hair and it doesn't cover their face all that much. Then when reading together with Kioko in the library we suddenly have black hair and bangs that cover the top half of our face. Just... What?
Some sort of event tracker would be nice. I had no idea what to do or where to go after the prologue ended. I kinda just wandered around aimlessly afterward trying to find or start events/interactions to work toward.
I think the biggest thing is that the listing for this game is constantly deleted and created again with each new version. I totally understand why since other games do it as well, but the difference is that they keep a "Main page" (See Total Maidness! by OnionCuttingNinja as an example) so that you can still see feedback left by other users and news posts about previous versions. That's not to mention ratings left for this also disappear and kind of makes rating this feel pointless since it'll be gone in a few weeks time anyways.
Admittedly I didn't make it far but just some bugs/issues I noticed when playing:
I didn't mean or want to make such a long comment but especially since it makes it look like I'm just pointing out the negatives but, like I said above, I just kept running into thing after thing. Sorry for such a long read!
Thank you very much for the effort and dedication in finding bugs and things to improve, I am aware that the game has many bugs, so in each update I'm fixing them, but thanks to these comments I can know what I have to correct and improve seriously thank you very much <3
1: I've been thinking the same thing, already for the next update it will be changed to a nicer font and with sense.
2: The clone that you comment are the same MC, only the one with black hair is the old MC and the one with white hair is the new remodel that I've been changing all the scenes where the old one appears
3: Did you try to open the mobile to look at the missions you have available with the girls?
4: I had not looked at it from that point of view, very interesting, thank you very much for the idea.
5: Again thank you very much for commenting on the bugs in the next update will be fixed <3
Don't worry about making comments so long and complete, I like that kind of comments, they bring a lot to improve
so everytime we work we go in a date with akane? interesting lol
i kinda dislike how for the first... idk... 20+ days, there's nothing to do outside of going to class and then go sleep lol most games have more map parts unlocked since the 1st days
Girl on girl and futa avoidable?
The futa content is totally avoidable, it will only appear if you buy a specific object. (●'◡'●)
Oh! Nice but what about girl on girl tho? does that somehow connected to futa so if you avoid futa you'll be avoiding girl on girl too. (゜-゜)
Of course, the idea is that most of the things are avoidable to keep people's tastes separate, but later on, for main story issues, they will have to be connected, I'm still thinking about this possibility (✿◡‿◡)
Great!
Oye,no es por ofender pero la próxima actualización deberia de ser solo de corrección de errores porque enserio que ya detecte como 5 bugs,es un MUY BUEN juego pero los bugs hacen que no se disfrute como debería
¿Estás en el grupo de Discord? Para que me reportes directamente todos los errores que encuentres. (●'◡'●)
Great game so far, but.... there's a bug, the game cuts off on me like 4 or 5 minutes after I start playing the game.
But still, it's still a great game! 👍 🎮
Thank you very much for your comment <3
I would like to know what device you use to know what is the error. (●'◡'●)
a Galaxy A14
It is very strange that it is not working for you, I checked the Android version and you are not having any problems.
I recommend you re-download and see if it works for you. (●'◡'●)
OK thanks
I bought the $5 version? Where's the cheat code + Exclusive Content?
If you come from the previous release, don't worry, nothing has changed, it's still the same version. The cheat menu you should find it in your room in a small chest. If you don't have it locked, you can write me from Gmail or Discord server and I will solve the problem. (✿◡‿◡)
This is the first time i bought it. But im looking for the password, since is not included anywhere in the game
Well it is very rare that the Patreon version asks you for a password, surely it is due to an error, in a moment I will check the version to see what is happening if I find any error I will release a version that fixes this soon, but first check what version of the game you are installing, maybe it is due to an installation error. ( ・∀・)ノ
Lo prometido es deuda,dije que si encontraba un error en la nueva versión vendria a reportarlo:Si hablas con Hikari en la biblioteca aparece el modelo antiguo de nuestro personaje
El modelo antiguo aparece en muchas cinematicas,tambien creo que encontré otro bug donde algunas cosas que no gastan energía requieren de energía como hacer de comer e ir a clase
Estoy pensando en la posibilidad de eliminar esa estadística, ya que no le encuentro algún uso o aporte, pero necesito la opinión de ustedes. (❁´◡`❁)
Pues si soy sincero es cierto lo de que no aporta nada,de hecho diría que es lo contrario,limita demasiado el progreso
Lo dejé así en esta actualización porque pienso poner varias interacciones para que hablar con Kioko no sea monótono y aburrido. A igual que con las demás personajes, pienso mejorar las interacciones que se tienen con ellas.
Bueno pero también debo de decir que se debe de mejorar mucho las cosas con el nuevo modelo del personaje ya que el juego toma cuenta como que ya conoci a Jocelyn por el evento de ir a la casa de la maestra pero nunca la llegue a ver en esas escenas
Creo que se debe el guardado que tienes, debe estar con algunos errores por las nuevas variables e implementaciones. Deberías conocer a Joseline en el nuevo prólogo. (❁´◡`❁)
Nop,desde la última vez que lo había jugado pasaron varias actualizaciones y también reinicie mi teléfono de fabrica asi que ese error es de parte del juego